tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post6072146920830106511..comments2023-09-15T18:56:45.506+05:00Comments on صدائے ساز: Huma Anwarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15318183615241947764noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-35501111955630017512010-12-26T22:52:31.144+05:002010-12-26T22:52:31.144+05:00Zabardast!!!Zabardast!!!Fuchsia Magichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01887970307114009798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-41878659512783739772010-12-19T02:07:04.282+05:002010-12-19T02:07:04.282+05:00ohh...hmm....I am so glad...and am feeling the hon...ohh...hmm....I am so glad...and am feeling the honor.<br /><br />Thank you...so nice of you.Thinkinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12803582964869804576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-53410114166684747852010-12-18T15:59:41.937+05:002010-12-18T15:59:41.937+05:00shukrya Thinking.....
mai tou aapke blog ke mutasi...shukrya Thinking.....<br />mai tou aapke blog ke mutasireen mein se hon, though i do not always comment but i am a silent reader and admirer..keep writing,keep sharing and keep thinking :)Huma Anwarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15318183615241947764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-56889932801169620372010-12-17T21:51:24.580+05:002010-12-17T21:51:24.580+05:00hmm...khoobsorat ghazal Huma Sahiba...
Buhat achi...hmm...khoobsorat ghazal Huma Sahiba...<br /><br />Buhat achi khud kalami hay...agar issay mehz khud kalami kaha ja sakay.... :)Thinkinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12803582964869804576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-15498954395629932072010-12-05T22:22:15.196+05:002010-12-05T22:22:15.196+05:00thank u for ur kind words Peerless..but i know the...thank u for ur kind words Peerless..but i know there are number of mistakes.. beher..wazn.. :)<br /><br /><br /><br />(and i am not here to prove anything:)..yeh mehz khud kalami hai)Huma Anwarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15318183615241947764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-77818395924666380172010-12-04T21:12:21.423+05:002010-12-04T21:12:21.423+05:00No, I meant to say that repetition of word chahlke...No, I meant to say that repetition of word chahlke twice in a line might have made it bad but you used chhalke and jhalke, so it is nice, everything is fine with the ghazal. Although I have read a lot from kaifi to faiz but I never succeeded in writing a good poetry, so you should be proud of your poetry.Shahid Majeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930952272257574606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-71418642447220262032010-12-04T15:09:25.418+05:002010-12-04T15:09:25.418+05:00@Peerless
i wrote these verses 10 yrs back in my t...@Peerless<br />i wrote these verses 10 yrs back in my teenage..<br />not just that i have repeated the same "qafiya" but there are some other mistakes also,and for this very reason i wrote in the subtitle "shairi,agar issay sha'iri kaha ja sake"<br />:)<br />thank u for passing byHuma Anwarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15318183615241947764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-64693618359896128552010-12-03T18:17:26.770+05:002010-12-03T18:17:26.770+05:00Hmm, by the way repetition of same words again and...Hmm, by the way repetition of same words again and again in poetry is considered bad.Shahid Majeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930952272257574606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-87732883199083881662010-12-03T16:00:58.617+05:002010-12-03T16:00:58.617+05:00aik taseeh
chhalke kabhi nigaah se, jhalke kabhi ...aik taseeh<br /><br />chhalke kabhi nigaah se, jhalke kabhi biyaan se...<br /><br />aur meri tooti phooti tehreer ko hamesha parhne ka shukrya Akhtar sahib<br /><br />Peerless ,shukryaHuma Anwarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15318183615241947764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-78215545589357245982010-12-03T00:16:38.833+05:002010-12-03T00:16:38.833+05:00Chhalke kabhi nigah se se, chhalke kabhi bayan se
...Chhalke kabhi nigah se se, chhalke kabhi bayan se<br />Wo roshni hai aur meray anday safar mein hai<br />Bahut umdaShahid Majeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930952272257574606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4563460735545072027.post-30207925098213662962010-12-02T22:54:03.948+05:002010-12-02T22:54:03.948+05:00Wah...
Chalkay kabhi nigha say, chalkay kabhi bai...Wah... <br />Chalkay kabhi nigha say, chalkay kabhi bain say<br />Wo roshni hai aur meray aunder safar may hai<br /><br />and wah...<br /><br />Shabe gham jo sitaray ke terha chamkay ga pulko per<br />Aisa be aik ashk mayre chashma ter may haiAkhtar Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09635876866214567866noreply@blogger.com